Post by blade on Mar 1, 2008 12:58:15 GMT -5
Name-Clawedheart
Pelt-Tabby w/ white
Eyes-amber w/ gray flecks
Gender-Tom
Clan-Pine
Rank-Deputy or Warrior
Description-Clawedheart has black and brown tabby fur. His chest fur is white,like his mother,Amber. He has a white front right paw. Clawedheart's eyes resemble his father strongly,cold amber,with gray flecks,like flies trapped in amber. He has the same piercing glare as his mentor,Smogfang. When he looks at a cat, the cat stops in his tracks,trapped,in the amber glare. Clawedheart hates his stripes,they remind him of his siblings killer. He has powerful shoulders and a strong back. His tail is long,able to reach his pale,pink nose. He is a large cat,about twenty eight inches from nose-tip to tail-tip. His ears have small tufts,like a lynx. He has bone-white claws,a little longer then most cat's claws. On his left hind leg,he has numerous scars. He has more claw-marks on his side also.
Personality-Clawedheart is a loner,he prefers being alone, a stranger in a crowded room. He has never made any friends in the clan. Cold and merciless,he fights with a precision that chills. His true nature is concealed behind glare,cold hisses, and staying away from other cats whenever possible. Most cats ignore him. He has never discussed his past with anyone,spirit or living. Deep inside, there is a hidden spark of kindness. But that spark is dying. Only the right cat can unlock his true self. For now,he is as cold and foreboding as his mentor and father.
History-Stripe had three siblings,Birch, a white tom with gray eyes and three legs,Patch, a tom with black patches,missing an ear, and Cloud, a tom with blind,blue eyes. When his father,Scar,saw the disabled kits,he flew into a fit of rage,murdering Stripe's brothers. Stripe narrowly missed the same fate,instead,Scar raked Stripe's left side,leaving deep scars. His mother,Amber, died from a bite to the neck, the blood lapping at Stripe's paws. This left him mentally scarred. Scar grabbed Stripe and carried him away,into PineClan territory.
The first three moons of his life were harsh. Scar would beat Stripe for trying to run away. Greenleaf that moon was brutally hot. While hunting,Scar dropped dead,possibly from dehydration. Stripe fled, and after many hours, arrived near the PineClan boarder, where he was found by a PineClan patrol and taken to a queen. The queen,Marshflower,seeing his eyes exclaimed"He looks like his heart was clawed out!" From then on,his name was Clawedkit.
As an apprentice,Clawedheart's mentor was Smogfang. Smogfang was a cold,foreboding cat,prone to glaring. One day,Smogfang was lecturing Clawedpaw. "Rouges are evil",insisted Smogfang. "Now",go over to Cold Bush and try your ability at hunting. Little did Clawedpaw know,but Smogfang hired a rouge to attack him. When Clawedpaw returned,his leg was cut in numerous places,eyes wild with fear. "Now what did I say!", meowed Smogfang calmly. Clawedpaw stuttered,"Rouges are evil"
"Good"
Clawedpaw hobbled away,wincing at every step,leaving a trail of blood behind him. From then on,Clawedpaw hated Smogfang with every hair on his pelt. When Smogfang died,Clawedpaw showed no remorse. He did not mourn with the rest of his clan.
Life had twisted the fragile kit into a cold-hearted,pitiless cat.
Pelt-Tabby w/ white
Eyes-amber w/ gray flecks
Gender-Tom
Clan-Pine
Rank-Deputy or Warrior
Description-Clawedheart has black and brown tabby fur. His chest fur is white,like his mother,Amber. He has a white front right paw. Clawedheart's eyes resemble his father strongly,cold amber,with gray flecks,like flies trapped in amber. He has the same piercing glare as his mentor,Smogfang. When he looks at a cat, the cat stops in his tracks,trapped,in the amber glare. Clawedheart hates his stripes,they remind him of his siblings killer. He has powerful shoulders and a strong back. His tail is long,able to reach his pale,pink nose. He is a large cat,about twenty eight inches from nose-tip to tail-tip. His ears have small tufts,like a lynx. He has bone-white claws,a little longer then most cat's claws. On his left hind leg,he has numerous scars. He has more claw-marks on his side also.
Personality-Clawedheart is a loner,he prefers being alone, a stranger in a crowded room. He has never made any friends in the clan. Cold and merciless,he fights with a precision that chills. His true nature is concealed behind glare,cold hisses, and staying away from other cats whenever possible. Most cats ignore him. He has never discussed his past with anyone,spirit or living. Deep inside, there is a hidden spark of kindness. But that spark is dying. Only the right cat can unlock his true self. For now,he is as cold and foreboding as his mentor and father.
History-Stripe had three siblings,Birch, a white tom with gray eyes and three legs,Patch, a tom with black patches,missing an ear, and Cloud, a tom with blind,blue eyes. When his father,Scar,saw the disabled kits,he flew into a fit of rage,murdering Stripe's brothers. Stripe narrowly missed the same fate,instead,Scar raked Stripe's left side,leaving deep scars. His mother,Amber, died from a bite to the neck, the blood lapping at Stripe's paws. This left him mentally scarred. Scar grabbed Stripe and carried him away,into PineClan territory.
The first three moons of his life were harsh. Scar would beat Stripe for trying to run away. Greenleaf that moon was brutally hot. While hunting,Scar dropped dead,possibly from dehydration. Stripe fled, and after many hours, arrived near the PineClan boarder, where he was found by a PineClan patrol and taken to a queen. The queen,Marshflower,seeing his eyes exclaimed"He looks like his heart was clawed out!" From then on,his name was Clawedkit.
As an apprentice,Clawedheart's mentor was Smogfang. Smogfang was a cold,foreboding cat,prone to glaring. One day,Smogfang was lecturing Clawedpaw. "Rouges are evil",insisted Smogfang. "Now",go over to Cold Bush and try your ability at hunting. Little did Clawedpaw know,but Smogfang hired a rouge to attack him. When Clawedpaw returned,his leg was cut in numerous places,eyes wild with fear. "Now what did I say!", meowed Smogfang calmly. Clawedpaw stuttered,"Rouges are evil"
"Good"
Clawedpaw hobbled away,wincing at every step,leaving a trail of blood behind him. From then on,Clawedpaw hated Smogfang with every hair on his pelt. When Smogfang died,Clawedpaw showed no remorse. He did not mourn with the rest of his clan.
Life had twisted the fragile kit into a cold-hearted,pitiless cat.