Post by kas on Feb 25, 2008 19:15:56 GMT -5
(and now the moment we've been waiting for.)
***if you have a open plains rogue please read.***
blacknose was walking in the forest. when he smelled a squirrel. he looked around for it and spotted it. he saw it on a large old oak tree. " this is going to be easy." he murmered, he found the lowest branch and gracefully but quitly jumped to it. he found the next and so on. until he was about 5 feet away. the squirrel moved higher, and so did he. the squirrel moved almost to the top, and he spotted a close branch that he would be able to get the squirrel with. but it ws thin, but he didn't care. he crouched and leaped, he landed safley. the branch began to creak and snap, all of the sudden it snapped in half and Blacknose was sent plummeting down, he landed on another branch but slipped of and tore out 3 of his claws and blood came flying out. he landed on another but the branch broke in half. he landed on the ground it sounded like thunder, the clouds grew gray and it started to rain. he couln't feel his legs, paws and his jaw. his tail was broken and his back hurt like heck. his neck he had almost broken. and the sun was covered by dark black clouds, so it seemed like night. the lightning was flashing and thunder was erupting from the sky as rain fell from above. as Blacknose layed there helplessly he cried, but no answer and cried, finaly he heard icecrystal, "what happened?" she said running to his side, but all that Blacknose could do was gurgle up blood. his body was covered with cuts and his black pelt was drenched in blood, even though his pelt was black it couldn't be seen by all the blood. she gently grabbed him and started to drag him back to the camp. finaly she got there, and all the cats came running asking questions, "go get spottedvine." she ordered, as silverleaf pushed her was through the crowd of cats she looked at him with worrie. " what happened here." she demaneded an answer. " it seems as if Blacknose was hunting something and he fell from the great oak in the forest." silverleaf explained explained, blacknose lifted his head and nodded his head. Spottedvine came running into the crowed. "okay take him to my den and i can try to save him but i'll do my best. hopefully he will survive throughout the night." as he was dragged once more, he wanted to go to sleep, but he knew if he did he wouldn't make it. Spottedvine gave him berries and put cobwebs all over his body. she told him to just relax, but don't fall asleep. as she walked out of her den she whispered something to icecrystal and icecrystal looked at him and her tail dropped. her head was hung low and she slowly walked away. now knowing he wasn't going to make it through tomorrow he wanted to say goodbye to his kin and den mates. he tried to call spottedvine, but all that came out was blood, his eyes started to roll back and he cried but blood came out again. spottedvine came running in and he said his final goodbyes. bye morning he was still alive, the clan was happy but he knew it would be the last time he would see sun. and he was right. he wanted to go peacefully, so he said a final goodbye and closed is eyes, remembering all the good times in his life, when he was a kit, when he became an apprentice, a warrior and the best part of his life was when arrowheart and pebblepelt were born he treasured the moment and he took his last breath, he whispered, "Goodbye." quitly to himself and he drifted away and his head lowered onto his paws and they all knew he was dead. his body was cold and they carefully took it and beried it in the woods. every one world miss him, but they would all remember him. for he was a great warrior.
***if you have a open plains rogue please read.***
blacknose was walking in the forest. when he smelled a squirrel. he looked around for it and spotted it. he saw it on a large old oak tree. " this is going to be easy." he murmered, he found the lowest branch and gracefully but quitly jumped to it. he found the next and so on. until he was about 5 feet away. the squirrel moved higher, and so did he. the squirrel moved almost to the top, and he spotted a close branch that he would be able to get the squirrel with. but it ws thin, but he didn't care. he crouched and leaped, he landed safley. the branch began to creak and snap, all of the sudden it snapped in half and Blacknose was sent plummeting down, he landed on another branch but slipped of and tore out 3 of his claws and blood came flying out. he landed on another but the branch broke in half. he landed on the ground it sounded like thunder, the clouds grew gray and it started to rain. he couln't feel his legs, paws and his jaw. his tail was broken and his back hurt like heck. his neck he had almost broken. and the sun was covered by dark black clouds, so it seemed like night. the lightning was flashing and thunder was erupting from the sky as rain fell from above. as Blacknose layed there helplessly he cried, but no answer and cried, finaly he heard icecrystal, "what happened?" she said running to his side, but all that Blacknose could do was gurgle up blood. his body was covered with cuts and his black pelt was drenched in blood, even though his pelt was black it couldn't be seen by all the blood. she gently grabbed him and started to drag him back to the camp. finaly she got there, and all the cats came running asking questions, "go get spottedvine." she ordered, as silverleaf pushed her was through the crowd of cats she looked at him with worrie. " what happened here." she demaneded an answer. " it seems as if Blacknose was hunting something and he fell from the great oak in the forest." silverleaf explained explained, blacknose lifted his head and nodded his head. Spottedvine came running into the crowed. "okay take him to my den and i can try to save him but i'll do my best. hopefully he will survive throughout the night." as he was dragged once more, he wanted to go to sleep, but he knew if he did he wouldn't make it. Spottedvine gave him berries and put cobwebs all over his body. she told him to just relax, but don't fall asleep. as she walked out of her den she whispered something to icecrystal and icecrystal looked at him and her tail dropped. her head was hung low and she slowly walked away. now knowing he wasn't going to make it through tomorrow he wanted to say goodbye to his kin and den mates. he tried to call spottedvine, but all that came out was blood, his eyes started to roll back and he cried but blood came out again. spottedvine came running in and he said his final goodbyes. bye morning he was still alive, the clan was happy but he knew it would be the last time he would see sun. and he was right. he wanted to go peacefully, so he said a final goodbye and closed is eyes, remembering all the good times in his life, when he was a kit, when he became an apprentice, a warrior and the best part of his life was when arrowheart and pebblepelt were born he treasured the moment and he took his last breath, he whispered, "Goodbye." quitly to himself and he drifted away and his head lowered onto his paws and they all knew he was dead. his body was cold and they carefully took it and beried it in the woods. every one world miss him, but they would all remember him. for he was a great warrior.